"Hey bro is it dark enough now?" said Xa'an. "Calm down man! You realize what will happen if we are spotted," I said. He stopped bugging me and I continued to look up wave patterns that would be hitting the shores of Hawaii. Then I heard something that I never heard before in this part of the island. "Shhhh!" I whispered. My brother new what was about to happen and he went silent. How did they find us? Who were they?
My brother and I are special. For sometime I noticed that we were being chased by a group of people. Their equipment was far more advanced than what we have seen on Earth. So advanced that they were able to spot my brother and I. Our first encounter was a shock because we have been on Earth for two decades now and we have never seen humans come up with anything as advanced as what these men used. It actually scared us I mean we were illegally living on Earth, but is that a problem.
"Oh no there coming!" I said.
"Journal is shutting down," said the computer.
I'm not sure I follow you. These two are aliens who are being chased by other aliens? More advanced aliens? Is the final line being said by the journal in which this very story is being recorded? I'm not totally sure.
ReplyDeleteSeems like this story needs a bigger space so you can show me more of this world. Then I'll be better able to understand it. That might make a good project for your mid-year story.
No they are being chased by humans. They themselves are aliens. The story is being recorded and the last part is supposed to be when they are disrupted by these humans.
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